Book Review: The Shack by William Young
Published in 2007 The Shack continues to be a highly recommended book, despite the (sometimes intense) controversy that surrounds it. The benefit of writing a review of The Shack almost two years after its initial publishing is that I’m able to draw upon a very large knowledge base when addressing some of the concerns surrounding this book. If you haven’t read the book what follows would be considered spoiler material. Also important to keep in mind, after reading the book I’ve come away from it with strong reservations. The review that follows will be fair and balanced, however, it will address the plethora of theological missteps in particular.
No one needs to be told that the book is a (cult?) phenomenon, having sold more than one million copies.1 The Shack is still, after 56 weeks on The New York Times paperback trade fiction best sellers list, holding position #2.2 A veritable success with non-Christians and Christians alike, it might strike some as odd that The Shack is causing the controversy that currently surrounds it.
So what exactly is The Shack all about? From the back cover, “Mackenzie Allen Philips’s youngest daughter, Missy, has been abducted during a family vacation and evidence that she may have been brutally murdered is found in an abandoned shack deep in the Oregon wilderness. Four years later, in the midst of his Great Sadness, Mack receives a suspicious note, apparently from God, inviting him back to that shack for a weekend.
Against his better judgment he arrives at the shack on a wintry afternoon and walks back into his darkest nightmare. What he finds there will change Mack’s world forever.
In a world where religion seems to grow increasingly irrelevant The Shack wrestles with the timeless question: Where is God in a world so filled with unspeakable pain? The answers Mack gets will astound you and perhaps transform you as much as it did him. You’ll want everyone you know to read this book!“3
I can attest to the last sentence above, I’ve been approached by countless people recommending to me The Shack, not just as a good (or ‘brilliant,’ as I’ve heard from some) piece of fiction, but as a book which will revolutionize the way I view and relate to God. I will say from the beginning that The Shack has neither revolutionized my view of or relationship with God. The Shack also hasn’t struck me as a particularly well written piece of fiction.
The Shack is a story which seeks to answer the question of how there could be pain and suffering in the world if a maximally good God exists. We’re told of a man named Mackenzie Philips (Mack) who, four years before the events of The Shack, took his family (except for his wife, Nan) on a camping trip. It was during this camping trip that his daughter, Missy, was abducted and murdered, though her body was not found and the murderer was not caught. Through this event we are informed of The Great Sadness which inflicts Mack. The story really begins when Mack, one March morning, receives a letter from God inviting him back to the same shack Missy was murdered in. After some hesitation Mack goes back to the shack where he meets the Trinity. God the Father is described as a ‘beaming African American woman’ named Elousia (combination of ‘El,’ the Hebrew name for God the creator and ‘ousia,’ Greek for ‘being’ or ‘essence’). Jesus as a typical man of Middle Eastern descent and the Holy Spirit as an Asian woman named Sarayu (Sanskrit for air or wind). 4 Further on in the story Mack eventually meets with Sophia, the personification of God’s wisdom . Over the course of the book we learn that God has met with Mack to remove The Great Sadness. The majority of the text is dialogue between God and Mack with topics ranging from the crucifixion to a proper understanding of the trinity to sin, redemption and forgiveness. As such stories go, Mack leaves the shack a changed man.
As a piece of literature I’m not overly enthusiastic about The Shack. Any book remotely approaching the genre of theological fiction is immediately compared to The Lord of the Rings, The Chronicles of Narnia or a number of the works of C.S. Lewis, at least in my mind. Not a good place to start. In any case, Young is a competent writer, though it takes reading a few chapters to realize this as the book starts out with more than a few awkward sentences: “He (Jesus) did so as a dependent, limited human being trusting in my life and power to be at work within him and through him. Jesus, as a human being, had no power within himself to heal anyone”.5 As the story progressed I found myself struggling through some of the dialogue as rather than let the story explain itself, Young seems to force both dialog and narrative. Forced narrative and poor dialogue don’t make for entertaining reading (though I seem to be one of few people, considering the books popularity). The fact that the book is fiction has been used by a few people to explain the rather bad theology of the book, this is one of the dangers of writing under the genre of fiction, theological fiction, even.
For the most part I didn’t find the book to be anything special, however, to now address a few concerns I have with this book.
Concern #1 — Goddess worship
Exodus 20:4–6
4“You shall not make for yourself an idol, or any likeness of what is in heaven above or on the earth beneath or in the water under the earth.
5You shall not worship them or serve them; for I, the LORD your God, am a jealous God, visiting the iniquity of the fathers on the children, on the third and the fourth generations of those who hate Me,
6but showing lovingkindness to thousands, to those who love Me and keep My commandments.”
There is a danger in describing God the Father as a black African-American woman. Furthermore, there’s even greater danger in describing the Holy Spirit as an Asian woman. It is dangerous to do so as it’s a violation of the second of the ten commandments. God the Father is Spirit and God the Holy Spirit is Spirit (seems self evident to me). This concern (objection?) is specifically addressed by Mark Driscoll, pastor of Mars Hill Church (Seattle). 6
Concern #2 — Sabellianism
The second of my concerns is a severe misunderstanding (and subsequently, misrepresentation) of the Trinity. As Dr. Norman Geisler has said in his critique of The Shack:
God appears as three separate persons (in three separate bodies) which seems to support Tritheism in spite of the fact that the author denies Tritheism (“We are not three gods”) and Modalism (“We are not talking about One God with three attitudes”—p. 100). Nonetheless, Young departs from the essential nature of God for a social relationship among the members of the Trinity. He wrongly stresses the plurality of God as three separate persons: God the Father appears as an “African American woman” (80); Jesus appears as a Middle Eastern worker (82). The Holy Spirit is represented as “a small, distinctively Asian woman” (82). And according to Young, the unity of God is not in one essence (nature), as the orthodox view holds. Rather, it is a social union of three separate persons. Besides the false teaching that God the Father and the Holy Spirit have physical bodies (since “God is spirit”—Jn. 4:24), the members of the Trinity are not separate persons (as The Shack portrays them); they are only distinct persons in one divine nature. Just as a triangle has three distinct corners, yet is one triangle. It is not three separate corners (for then it would not be a triangle if the corners were separated from it), Even so, God is one in essence but has three distinct (but inseparable) Persons: Father, Son, and Holy Spirit.7
Elousia (God the Father) states on page 99: “When we three spoke ourself into human existence as the Son of God, we became fully human. We also chose to embrace all the limitations that this entailed. Even though we have always been present in this created universe, we know became flesh and blood. It would be like this bird, who nature it is to fly, choosing only to walk and remain grounded. He doesn’t stop being the bird, but it does alter his experience of life significantly”. Geisler has also said in response to this, “this is a serious misunderstanding of the Incarnation of Christ. The whole Trinity was not incarnated. Only the Son was (Jn. 1:14), and in His case deity did not become humanity but the Second Person of the Godhead assumed a human nature in addition to His divine nature. Neither the Father nor Holy Spirit (who are pure spirit–John 4:24) became human, only the Son did.“8
Concern #3 –Implied Inclusivism / Universalism
“I am the best way any human can relate to Papa or Sarayu.“9
“Those who love me come from every system that exists. They were Buddhists or Mormons, Baptists or Muslims, Democrats, Republicans and many who don’t vote or are not part of any Sunday morning or religious institutions. I have followers who were murderers and many who were self-righteous. Some are bankers and bookies, Americans and Iraqis, Jews and Palestinians. I have no desire to make them Christian, but I do want to join them in their transformation into sons and daughters of my Papa, into my brothers and sisters, into my Beloved.10
Being the best way to relate to God is a far cry from being the only way to relate to God (John 3:16; 14:6). Nowhere in The Shack does Jesus clarify that he is the only way to God, he remains the best way. “I have no desire to make them Christian, but I do want to join them in their transformation into sons and daughters of my Papa;” what else could this mean?
Well, I have many more concerns than this, however, this is getting quite long so I think here is where I’ll stop. If you haven’t read The Shack, don’t. And with that, this review is finished.
- http://www.usatoday.com/life/books/news/2008–04-30-shack_N.htm ↩
- http://www.nytimes.com/2009/06/28/books/bestseller/bestpapertradefiction.html?_r=1&ref=bestseller ↩
- William Young, The Shack (Newbury Park: Windblown Media, 2007), dust cover. Emphasis in original. ↩
- The Shack, 82–86. ↩
- The Shack, 100. ↩
- http://www.marshillchurch.org/media/doctrine/trinity-god-is/the-shack ↩
- http://www.normgeisler.com/ ↩
- Ibid ↩
- The Shack, 100 ↩
- Ibid., 182 ↩
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